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ACT Question of the Day Explained – March 26, 2014 – English, Wordiness

Today’s ACT question of the day is an English question from the passage about baseball.  We’re asked to fix the underlined part of this sentence (only the first part of which is pasted below, because the final clause doesn’t affect us):

I was a freshman at a university that was located in the Midwest at the time,

There is nothing egregiously wrong with this sentence, but it could be better. Continue reading